My favious(favourite/favorite) movie(TV series) is <<Qian fu>>(Lurk 不寫書名號，用斜體).I think it is very funning(funny) and it really has something foy(for) everyone. This is Sun Honglei's latest movie(TV series). I think he is a great movies(movies 改成 actor 演員). However, it's too long and sometimes it doesn't interest me as much. But this is really (a) great movie(TV series) for us.
首先，《潛伏》是電視劇，不是電影。英語中的書、電影、電視劇是不加書名號的，而是將其名稱斜體且首字母大寫。
妳查查《潛伏》的片頭圖片，它的英文表達是lurk，不能用拼音。
此短文的表達還是比較清楚的。但要批評妳的是，那麽多單詞拼寫錯誤，覺得拼寫拿不準為什麽不自己動手查字典？這是妳自己能解決的事啊！
要是沒有字典就下載個有道桌面詞典，挺好用的。