| Dear Kelly, I’ve been back home safely from England. Thank you for the warm help during my stay in England. Last week, I participated in the Cultural Exchange Week. I enjoyed myself in your country. We visited the city museum and some places of interest, which made me have a better understanding of the English society, culture and history. Of course, I also made many new friends. What’s more, I was lucky enough to stay at your home. And I’ll never forget the days we spent together. Here I especially thank you for the dictionary you offered me as a gift. It’s a great help for me to learn English well. I will treasure and make full use of it. Welcome to China when it’s convenient for you! Yours, Li Hua |
| 試題分析：本文是壹篇書信。文章給出了提綱式漢語提示。成文時應註意壹下幾點：（1）內容要點要齊全；a交流活動中的收獲;b難忘在Kelly家的美好日子;c感謝她送妳的英文詞典。（2）人稱：以第壹人稱為主；（3）時態：壹般過去時和壹般現在時為主；（4）適當使用壹些連詞和插入語，使文章自然、流暢；（5）恰當使用壹些高級詞匯和句型，以增加文章的檔次。 亮點說明1.使用高級句型：（1）I enjoyed myself in your country. We visited the city museum and some places of interest, which made me have a better understanding of the English society, culture and history.（2）It’s a great help for me to learn English well.2.使用了過渡詞語：What’s more, I was lucky enough to stay at your home. Of course, I also made many new friends. 3.使用了重要短語：I will treasure and make full use of it. I participated in the Cultural Exchange Week. I enjoyed myself in your country. |