寫作思路:要直接簡化任務語言。在敘述中,我們要把直接敘述變成間接敘述,盡可能簡化人物語言。這樣,即使情節連貫,又使語句“簡練”。
This is my room.It's big and clean.There is a big bed in my room.There is a schoolbag on the chair.There is a dictionary on the desk. And there is a pair of glasses on the TV.Look at the photo.It's on the wall. I like my room.
譯文:
這是我的房間。它又大又幹凈。我的房間裏有壹張大床。椅子上有壹個書包。桌子上有壹本字典。電視上有壹副眼鏡。看這張照片。它在墻上。我喜歡我的房間。