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各位英語大神們,可以幫我修改壹下這篇作文嗎,我是高三的,謝了!

Want?to?win?money?by?luck!most?of?our?school?students,especially?boys,are?addicated?to?the?ball?gambling.?In?the?meantime,it?is?also?a?bad?way?for?them?to?seek?for?excitement.As?we?known,students?who?take?part?in?such?activity?almost?have?no?economic?revenue,which?may?drive?them?to?commit?a?crime.What'more,sometimes?the?students?can't?focus?their?mind?on?study,making?the?school?work?influenced.Not?only?should?we?read?more?encouraging?articles?in?order?to?improve?our?

spirit,but?also?should?we? stay?away?from?guys?who?are?always?losing?themselves?in?ball?gambling.