第二 妳問詩體,明顯這首lyric poem,和narrative對立,不是敘事詩都是lyric poem。
妳問格律我就不懂了,格律這個東西是中文詩獨有的。
別的再和妳講些吧 比如說裏面對personification(擬人)的使用(Winds that wake the birds and bees;This is the way the birdie sings等等 )還有比喻。我因為不知道妳想知道什麽所以也不知道怎麽多講了,如果還有想問的話可以追問,附上壹首我自己寫的英文詩吧
Seclusion
Alone,
In the dim glow
of street light,
brighter than a candle.
Tremble
with every note
in the music
that I play with my soul.
Puzzled
while sinking in a black hole,
like the words
that couldn't get out of my throat.
恩 又想起來壹些。看到每壹段的開頭和結尾都是同壹個“This is the way ...“,算是個排比吧,